She had a vibrant smile. Waved everyday; she did. Wilderness growing into boundless images. Beautiful as they seemed, Were above her transient feet. I drove across the eerie wild, Hoping to say goodbye; I knew she wouldn't seem to please, An abrupt end wasn't her style. Leaving my town; Fresh roses i kept above, Her cold, Cold cadaver.

Excellent poem!!! Who was this poem intended to cuz it is definitely entertaining. I really like how you kept ur poem concise and it had a lot of meaning into it. You could some exclamation points to develop your poem. Lastly, I really like how your photograph connects with your poem. Keep thinking creatively:)
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thank you so much for your feedback! Ill definitely try to incorporate your ideas
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